a brief comic

Laura · **Posted:** Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:24 pm

Hi guys.
Here is my first comic EVER! It concerns mermaids. And changing your mind. and stuff.
I hope you get a kick out of it :)

Murfish · **Posted:** Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:33 am

Man! that comic is beautiful! love the style, the concept, the colors and the story telling is really well used. Awesome!
7th page is the one i like the most :happy:

Osorio · **Posted:** Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:11 pm

Agreed, this looks great. I like how there isn't any dialog or narration here. Everything is left for the viewer to think out and I think it allows for the reader to immerse themselves in the story.

Great job.

zombiezach · **Posted:** Thu Feb 18, 2010 3:23 pm

pretty freaken cool, i got so into the story that i kinda felt like i was running out of air when she was underwater for so long. haha. great story!

t-wei · **Posted:** Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:33 pm

That first page is pure eyecandy. Love everything except for the the blurred border, seems to clash with the traditional vibe i get from the rest of the piece. Maybe a nice painty border would fix this.

Very cool comic, colours are wicked.

Igo · **Posted:** Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:07 pm

Awesome... any sort of sequential work that clearly tells a story without text is a pure win! Gota admit, I thought the kids were calling her a witch at first haha.

Nice take on a mermaid tale, love the creepy ass male one that has an unhealthy crush on her... and his nipples are ace.

Welcome to the forums! Cant wait to see your take on something else.

ankles · **Posted:** Sun Feb 21, 2010 6:41 am

aw man. thats a bummer.

it looks great tho.

poor guy

dylanglynn · **Posted:** Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:48 am

very, very awesome.

Nova天 · **Posted:** Mon Feb 22, 2010 1:51 pm

That was pretty whimsical and funny, lovely style to go along with it as well.
I'm diggin the picture dialogue too, very clever.

sussman · **Posted:** Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:51 pm

Hey there!
Great work, the story reads very clearly, and I like the colour schemes,
Also..that sexy male mermaid is awesome.
so are you selling these or what? :)
lets see more!

bird · **Posted:** Mon Feb 22, 2010 11:35 pm

Yeah, post some more, this was very nice, loving the mood you gave with the colours and everything, i've heard stories like this with whales and such on the ocean :smile:

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