thought ide put sumthin up...
some newer oldish stuffff...






tear it apart

well the first problem I see is the colors. Learn your colors and learn them good!
you seem to use way to much black in your shading which makes your pic seem muddy. Also the lightsource seems off at some places, and really flat around the stomach and the leg to the left on the first one. her knee to the right ( our right ) seems kinda painfull though. doesn't feel that natural to me at least. also she has the smallest thumb ever! haha :P bend those arms a bit aswell. they are really stiff.
on the last one, the hair is really flat. don't be afraid to go more dark and bright in your stuff. value is your friend!

I still think this is good stuff though! keep pushing it! I like the sad face on the first a lot.

sweet..ive been needing somebody to tell me these things...:D thanks

You definitely have a confident style. I could see it going leaps and bounds further with a bit of life-studies though. Certain things you're really nailing, like the girls inner arms in the last piece, but the girls legs and hands in the first piece could use a bit of the same attention to push them a bit further. Keep working with interesting solves for what's really going on and dont just settle for something because it works good enough.

Solid stuff though, Id love to see some newer work.